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2007年9月14日 1:13 alone.... :( (7 個評論)

titi11111

alone.... :(

alone.....
man of the night
never seen a light
lonely...thats right
a man who lives aloneeeee...
will he hold on...?
should the life go on...?
or may it just gone...?
before falling down...?
a long night is not enough
coz loneliness is really tough
& love has gone with all stuff
a lesson i should learn
to let go with out concern
about ppl and there pain
coz pain is all wat i earn
but a good man should be there
u may find him any where
ya.. i was always there ......care abt her...
but she nvr felt me care
is that the kindness cost
to let ur love get lost
or fight to release ur host
plz baby feel me
feel my love...can't u c !!!!
ur hero I'm trying to be...
waiting long years for u...
stay with me plz don't go...
with out u... there's nothing to do
loneliness become my friend
and the long nights have no end
prays & wishes all i can send
afraid of being alone again
with out u i become insane
sad & tired that's the begin
...i love u...
don't u know...
can't u c...
don't u feel...
.......don't ever forget meeeee......

2007年10月16日 23:0Re: alone.... :(

rmg978
Ruddy 28, haverhill, 麻薩諸塞州, 美國
this is great bro i realy like it.

2007年10月17日 6:5Re: Re: alone.... :(

titi11111
TiTi 24, 開羅, 埃及
ohhh thx Ruddy ;)

2007年10月17日 20:31Re: Re: Re: alone.... :(

rmg978
Ruddy 28, haverhill, 麻薩諸塞州, 美國
you have tallent bro.

2007年10月17日 20:32Re: Re: Re: Re: alone.... :(

rmg978
Ruddy 28, haverhill, 麻薩諸塞州, 美國
keep on with the good work.

2007年9月28日 3:51Re: alone.... :(

Riker15
Shadow 高級會員 已驗証的會員 20, Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance-Carl Sandburg, 田納西州, 美國
Good Poem

2007年9月28日 19:24Re: Re: alone.... :(

titi11111
TiTi 24, 開羅, 埃及
thx:)

2007年9月28日 22:17Re: Re: Re: alone.... :(

Riker15
Shadow 高級會員 已驗証的會員 20, Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance-Carl Sandburg, 田納西州, 美國
ur welcome
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